Fantasy Creature By Martin

Posted on July 27, 2007
Filed under 07 AllStars, Literacy

I was scouting the surroundings of the battlefield when I spotted a cave at the corner of my eye. I walked cautiously towards the large cave then suddenly I see 2 eyes filled with hatred and revenge, peering at me from the darkness of the cave. The mysterious creature crept out of the cave. I couldn’t believe my eyes I was standing in front of a dragon.

The dragon towered above me standing on its 2 muscular hind legs. The dragon was at least triple my size; its green scales shimmered in the sun. It stretched its enormous wings majestically catching the breeze on its wings. The dragon rocketed off the ground and glided above the tree canopy like a kite in a calm breeze. The dragon then swooped back down to the ground right towards me….BANG… I wake up on the battlefield I don’t know how I got here then I suddenly remember the dragon, could it have all been a dream?

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3 Responses to “Fantasy Creature By Martin”

Zara on July 30th, 2007 9:24 pm

Hey
Zara from Bellare P.S again sound like you guys get up to a lot at you school. Well thanks for coming to see my Blog because i saw the dot on my clustr map
Well I will be back soon Great story by the way!!!!
Keep Up The GREAT Work
Zara
sokeina on August 7th, 2007 10:33 pm

Hi Martin,
I really liked your story and fantasy creature. You know i think that in your small worlds project you could have done like a cave where you saw the creature appear from. It doesn’t matter that was just some advice on what you could have added, but you didn’t know that Mrs.P was going to make us make a fantasy creature related to our small worlds project.
Toooooooooooooooooooooooooodles
Steven on August 21st, 2007 11:29 pm

hi i liked your story and i loved your picture.