KABOOM!!!! The loudest explosion I have ever heard.
I could hear people groaning, people about to die. I decided to stand, but I couldn’t. When the explosion went off a rock went flying and hit my leg. Then all of a sudden it went dark – just like that! People were screaming and I could hear everyone’s echo. Thunderously a pile of rocks went tumbling down the mine shaft. I thought they were going to hit me, but it was just the echo.
The atmosphere was dusty and I could hardly breathe. Suddenly holes of light started poking out of the wall and I started to breathe again. Meanwhile, another explosion went off …… no more holes of light.
Struggling to breathe, I lifted myself off the ground. Staggering along the ground I was almost there when a pile of rocks fell and struck me to the ground again.
Despite having a broken leg and a pile of rocks striking me down, I got up and kept on walking. I made it right to the pile of rocks blocking the exit. I started to push the rocks out of the way to get out. Then they all fell to unblock the exit – I was FREE!
By Gavin
Dear Allstars
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Gavin that was a great story you did there. 😆 . It was so interesting ,even my friend liked it . 🙄
🙄 Excellent job,Gavin!:P Great ideas! Keep it up! 😆
Dear Gavin,
Gavin, do you realise you have written an amazing story however at the same time the story is a abit sad!You absolutly put in some great WOW words and vocabulary!
Gavin…Keep it up! 😀
Happy Regards,
Charlotte 😀